Target Audience Feedback- Finished Film

1. Emily, Nathan, Neve, Harry5 January 2017 at 10:33

   -Great concept and very interesting ending with good framing
   -Makes us want to know how she died
   -Appropriate choice of soundtracks and mise en scene

   -Beginning shot maybe too long, needing a variety of shots during that scene, otherwise very good
   -Sound volume differs, however that is a very minor issue

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2. Joe, Alex and Imogen's Blog5 January 2017 at 10:34

   -Meaning is really clear of the message.
   -Shots in Brighton are really effective as all the sound, editing and camera links together.
   -Sad music to represent the emotions in the film is good.

   -The vary of sound between the two characters is obvious, one is louder than the other.
   -You can also hear the sound echo in the bedroom scene.
   -The establishing shot of Brighton could be at the beginning to introduce the location but it is still good.

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3. Sam, Jake, Connor5 January 2017 at 10:34

   The overall story was very clear, there was good use of varying shot sizes and distances. There were many locations which was good. The only issue was the sound being loud at some points during the film. Also in the shots that were taken in Brighton the sound seems muffled because of the wind.

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4. Erol Jacob Oscar5 January 2017 at 10:35

   -Nice twist.
   -Could have more shot variety.
   -Good use of non-diegetic sound.
   -Good use of setting (mise en scene).